This story tugs at my heart strings. It exposes the character's fears and impending situation with eloquence and within the confines of 250 words! Lovely.
Thanks for the link to the short story. Scott created an atmosphere full of suspense and I love his description of the surroundings - vivid, you can imagine yourself there. I hope there is a continuation coz I'm anxious to know what will happen to Rudy.
If I had more than 250 words, I might have had Rudy give a little in return. Moni, thanks for posting my story. I will take a look at Marks forum and definitely put something there for him to critique. I had another idea this morning. I approach new ideas thinking of surprise--what would be a shock? Mr. Schprock's story got me thinking more along those lines.
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Hi Moni,
Thanks for the link to the short story. Scott created an atmosphere full of suspense and I love his description of the surroundings - vivid, you can imagine yourself there. I hope there is a continuation coz I'm anxious to know what will happen to Rudy.
If I had more than 250 words, I might have had Rudy give a little in return. Moni, thanks for posting my story. I will take a look at Marks forum and definitely put something there for him to critique. I had another idea this morning. I approach new ideas thinking of surprise--what would be a shock? Mr. Schprock's story got me thinking more along those lines.
Blue--me too!
Scott--glad your writing block has been broken. You go "Idea Man!"
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